Groped And Enjoyed It Just A Little Something I Worked Hard On. What Do You Think?
Just a little something I worked hard on. What do you think? - groped and enjoyed it
Hope to meet TheOne I like
I closed my eyes and made a vow.
Groping in the dark
Groan, if it does not.
Hear my words.
You should know:
Part of me
Inside,
Groan.
Beat,
Love
Enjoy with us.
Leal is my heart,
Not black like a heart.
Every night I have to wait
Singing in the light of love.
So perfect is never anything to end.
10 points is the person who can telll me what to do with this poem that made me so hard.
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10 comments:
The lines show the number of syllables. She went 9-1 and then rise again.
It is an acrostic.
Higgly Pigtlelness, whatever.
He saw all these things?
.... Todd ..... 2 hours .... Todd ..... Todd .....
You see, what I have done?
I took what he did, he says the things in my head that you can not see them, in the ..... s, and nobody knows what they mean but for a moment, have lived and breathed his thoughts and feel better.
Is it not make you happy?
Nice poem cinn. I like your style (s). I will publish one day, the courage to make a reality. For now, I thank all who read others.
good work, Todd.
Judge their hard work, **** that may have stood on his head .. You can almost half a ham sandwich have drowned. Joking aside, I have to make efforts in all his words. I also think that the natural poet. average person is tired for hours trying to writr on one of the lines. Words appear away from you. and your baby, a jewel, thank you for all good poetry. great poetry.
PBN
Milady, squid have a pint (Damn!) Point in the waveform, but your humble servant is a different story if I read a line of three, starting with the first, so beautiful and makes much sense. . .
Of course, you can begin the third and all third reading. Just beautiful. Two poems in one. You can also start with the second line, and read three ... works ...
George Sand has something in his letters to F. Chopin.
Only an opinion of your humble servant .. Milady
still pretty damn Englishwoman, my highest of the Admiralty (!) admiration ... a really great job ...
Of course, I can more easily) be wrong (a ciggy, which means ... (used by the frog with a .22 Hornet case shot, turn off the lights ...)
Trixi difficult, complicated!
Did you publish?
Waveform is groovy ...
Engagement in the search for the same reason why I wrote my poem.
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